What Your Website Copy Says to a Client Before They Ever Book a Session

Before a client ever steps foot in your office, they already have preconceived notions about you. This happened through your website, probably before they even landed on your bio page.

These initial assumptions about you happen quickly, and they happen because of the words on your homepage. Therapy is a business built on trust and safety and your website either builds it, or breaks it.


Trust means something different in this field

Most businesses are transactional. They offer something for a price. But therapy requires more than just a simple transaction. Therapy requires vulnerability, safety, and trust. You are asking someone to trust you with the most vulnerable and raw parts of themselves, despite you being a stranger to them. 


That means your website has to provide information and speak to the reader on an emotional level too. Your website is the true first step in building rapport with your clients. Too much clinical language can come off as cold and uninviting. But you still want to showcase WHY you are qualified to be in that chair hearing their stories. Your website needs to let them know “I see you. In this space you will be heard.” 


“Professional” doesn’t always breed confidence

Here’s the thing, you did the work, you completed the trainings, and you passed the exams. Naturally you will want to showcase those accomplishments to stand out by saying “Look, I am qualified because of this training and that degree.” The catch is that someone reaching out for help doesn’t care as much about the accolades as they do about the person behind them. Too much clinical speak can present as cold or robotic.


Someone reaching out for help, most likely for the first time, doesn’t want to only see a list of degrees or excessive clinical language. They are nervous and scared and all they want to know is “Why should I trust this stranger?”


Overwritten copy can read as overcompensating

Some versions of website copy try too hard to sound inviting or qualified. Trying too hard to sound like the right person for the role can actually make people believe you are unfit to help them. Your mission statements and “About” pages mean nothing if the person reading them doesn’t feel like you are speaking directly to them.


Your website copy needs to invoke a, “Wow it’s like they know me.” type of feeling. You can use all the big words and all the acronyms but it’s all for nothing if your audience doesn’t understand it or, to be frank, even care that you trained in CBT or EMDR.

What really builds trust within the first ten seconds

Specificity builds more trust than reassurance. Let’s compare these two lines:

  • “We provide a judgment free space where you can truly be yourself.”

  • “I remember sitting alone in my room staring off into space afraid that there would never be an end to the struggles I was facing.”

The first sentence is generic and used often by different practices and clinicians. While this sentence is true; it doesn’t speak directly to anyone. The second sentence is specific, it calls on a memory, it tells them you’ve been there and you made it through. 


One sentence is a claim. It says “I know what I’m supposed to say on my therapy website.”

The other recognizes the reader’s experience. Recognition can make a stranger feel safe enough to book that first session.


Quick self-check for your own homepage

Before you run to your page and immediately change everything. Take a look again at your website and ask yourself:

  1. If I removed my practice name, would you be able to tell that this is my site? Or does it sound like every other therapy website out there.

  2. Am I making a claim of the environment of my practice, or am I recognizing where my clients are when they first reach out to me?

  3. Is there any sentence on this page that could only be written by someone who has actually sat with people going through this? If not, where can I add more sentences that include recognition and not a generic claim?

  4. Would a nervous, first time visitor feel informed or do they feel recognized and seen?

Your website doesn’t need a long list of credentials and accomplishments. You can list these as a brief overview of your qualifications, but don’t draw it out. Make your website sound like someone who already understands the person reading it. Recognition can mean the difference between reaching out or closing the tab.

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